we have made slight adjustments to our plot which are;
- We have made it a lot simpler by just having our man girl
taken and our hero needs to get her back
- scaled back the sub plot of the betrayal of a friend as it
was proving harder to explain while keeping the impact of her being taken.
There was too much going on.
- Another aspect we have scaled down is the script to our
hero simply saying “if you hurt her I will kill you" this I feel creates
lot more tension and the impact of his words are increased.
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